You need a bit more emotion in your voice. I feel you know your material (an authority I'd yet to witness in your articles) but you are too bound to the script or its deadpan delivery to impart the urgency, warmth and charisma that you can provide. Also "candy from a baby" is a cliche.
I wonder what a second take would have sounded like. Did you try one?
You need a bit more emotion in your voice. I feel you know your material (an authority I'd yet to witness in your articles) but you are too bound to the script or its deadpan delivery to impart the urgency, warmth and charisma that you can provide. Also "candy from a baby" is a cliche.
ReplyDeleteI wonder what a second take would have sounded like. Did you try one?